Small Things Like These
Experience: Immersion
Narrative Technology: Free Indirect Discourse
"It seemed both proper and at the same time time deeply unfair that so much of life was left to chance." Keegan 52
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June 4, 2025
Small Things Like These
Experience: Immersion
Narrative Technology: Free Indirect Discourse
““Furlong had come from nothing. Less than nothing, some might say. His mother, at the age of sixteen, had fallen pregnant while working as a domestic for Mrs Wilson, the Protestant widow who lived in the big house a few miles outside of town. When his mother’s trouble became known, and her people made it clear that they’d have no more to do with her, Mrs Wilson, instead of giving his mother her walking papers, told her she should stay on, and keep her work. On the morning Furlong was born, it was Mrs Wilson who had his mother taken into hospital, and had them brought home. It was the first of April, 1946, and some said the boy would turn out to be a fool.” Keegan 11
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June 4, 2025
The Poppy War
Experience: Frustration
Narrative Technology: Suspense
“[Phoenix] "...And you know that should you give the command, I will call something terrible. I will wreak a disaster to destroy the island of Mugen completely, as thoroughly as Speer was destroyed. By your choice, many will die." "Many more will live," Rin said, and she was nearly certain that it was true. And even if it wasn't, she was willing to take that gamble. She knew she would bear full responsibility for the murders she was about to commit, bear the weight of them for as long as she lived. But it was worth it. For the sake of her vengeance, it was worth it. This was divine retribution for what the Federation had wreaked on her people. This was her justice. "They aren't people," she whispered. "They're animals. I want you to make them burn. Every last one." Kuang 502 (Essentially its frustration through suspense because it is pretty clear to the reader that Rin is going to have thousands of people murdered)
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June 4, 2025